This is the draft of my final product. So far it has had successful feedback regarding the information, the image and contents.
However, to improve the product further I will include more factors to make it appeal to my target market. Firstly, I will adjust the subtitles at the top of the page and find a more suitable place to put them because they distract the reader from the main subject. Therefore, I will put a border across the top of the page to give additional information and to compliment the page. Additionally, I will change the names included to non existing music artists, because it makes the magazine look more original. Finally, regarding the quote and subtitles, I will experiment where they look best on the page to be most effective.
For the contents page, I will change the layout to be across one page instead of a double-page spread in order to remove the left page due to it's poor quality. The photograph on this page fails to match the magazine's atmosphere because of the contrasting way I have edited it. This means that I will work with only the right page and improve it buy including a heading and a quote to grab the readers attention. Also, I will re edit the photograph's background to make it look cleaner, therefore the patches won't distract the reader and it will make the page look more professional.
This middle page flows with the atmosphere of the previous pages due to the colour scheme and text included. However, to improve this page I will experiment with effects on the title, using InDesign, to make it stand out more, and grab the readers attention. Furthermore, I will readjust the columns of the article, so the page has a higher quality, as it will match the articles, such as Classic Rock's middle page, that inspired me.
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